Poor wording, sentence structure, grammar, subjectivity[edit source]
This page reads like on an opinion piece on a news site, not even close to the standard this wiki should strive for.
Sirhephaestus (talk) 20:26, 16 November 2018 (UTC)
- I cleaned it a bit, I'm not an orchestral expert though so there are still probably some improvements to be made. --laagone talk 20:41, 16 November 2018 (UTC)